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Page 4. Whee. Panel one shows the error of using one-point perspective and exceeding the adviseable frame size -- I should have introduced distortion toward either edge. Also, Polypheides' freighter Endurance is casting a shadow on the Silverfish here -- that didn't come out so well. ;_;

The heavy outline in panel two was a mistake -- I think I should have gone for a white gap outline instead.

Also, I shouldn't have covered up the tip of the freighter's bow with that balloon in panel four....

Is it silly for me to like that exclamation point in the last panel? 'Cause I do.... ;p

Edot 30 May 06 -- replaced image file


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More ships, yes.....

I think one of the more effective techniques you've got with your story-telling is the entire 'shouting loud enough to be heard from far off the ship' deal. Really adds a nice touch.

Yes, I'm also watching the story. :) I like the captain's admiration for the looming Torvan craft.