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Two-page spread, apology for the large file. I'll put a smaller one in scraps so that the whole page can be critiqued more easily --> [link]
Ok... there's not much here that I'm happy with. The chapter title came out well enough, and panel one is all right overall, aside from the longboat on the far left being totally mislit. It's simply not turned far enough toward the moon to be so brightly lit... ;_;
Panel two is fine enough, but it goes downhill from there. I cringe at each of the four final panels. I should like to note that I gave up being a stoner right when I was doing this page
(c) Avatar Z Brown
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Ok... there's not much here that I'm happy with. The chapter title came out well enough, and panel one is all right overall, aside from the longboat on the far left being totally mislit. It's simply not turned far enough toward the moon to be so brightly lit... ;_;
Panel two is fine enough, but it goes downhill from there. I cringe at each of the four final panels. I should like to note that I gave up being a stoner right when I was doing this page
(c) Avatar Z Brown
First Page | <--Previous Page | Next Page-->
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i've no idea how i ended up here again, but damn, these are some really fine pages.You show genuine interest and enthusiasm for your personal world and that really shows in these pages.You should do more comics man!!