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Tavern 'Sketch' WIP 4 by ~Amarynceus:iconAmarynceus:


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Submitted: September 15, 2006
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Again I go with the subjecting you to this thing. :D

It may not look like it at first glance, but there's been quite a bit of work since the last WIP of this -- it's mostly really small though. I tinted it just for a change from the black and white.

Usual routine -- indulging your critical eye will make me happy. Anything that seems wrong, don't hesitate to point it out even if you don't know exactly how to fix it. I can usually figure out how to fix things once I see that they're wrong.

I really want this to be as good as possible; I think it will make an excellent key piece for my portfolio push in a few weeks -- I'm trying to finish up a bunch of new pieces as well as touch up old ones to get as broad and appealing a body of work as possible.

Man, they need some kind of huge puppy-dog eyed emote. ;p So I can use it when I say: Please rip my work to shreds!! :D It really needs to be as strong as possible.

Oh, except ignore the hand of the guy at the lower right; I had fixed the hand and arm and the cards when I did...something... trying to add to a selection and Painter crashed. Of course, that sort of thing only happens when one has neglected one's normally careful regimen of frequent saves... and poof goes almost two hours.

And finally, it's pointless to fave any of these WIPs as once it's done I'll delete them all anyway. I'll leave them up until then though -- it's kind of interesting to see the slow evolution of the picture. Links: WIP 1, WIP 2, WIP 3.

Painter, Wacom. Cover pencil, smooth gouache and various blenders (mostly the round blender brush and the just add water blender)

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WOW its changed alot! I love it man fits the mood and style and really immersive into the fantasy element!
Yeah, it really has. I just spent a minute or so with all the versions I've uploaded opened in separate tabs , flipping back and forth.

Thanks!
Mmmm... looking pretty close to done, actually. If I could find something to pick at, I would, but I'm not seeing much. The depth between the woman with the ponytail and the person sitting at the bar seems a bit extreme... maybe if someone was walking up the stairs in the background it would reinforce the field back there, and prevent that painting on the wall from being taken as a character (which I momentarily did).
Yah, I've been pondering where to include some background figures. The original intent was to have the floor of the common room filled with tables and figures to fill in the space, but I get this little twitch in my eye when I think of the work. There will certainly be a figure or two up in the second floor, and one on the stairs would be good too. I think I'll draw some quick blocked figures and move 'em about to find something that makes a good flow.

Hmm.. actually, two or three strategically placed tables could be useful for convincing the viewer of the depth of space... and convincing the artist, for that matter! :D

Truth be told, I think there's a perspective glitch somehow. Since this began with no perspective study or anything I've been tacking on structure to a less than coherent structure.

Thanks for the input, I always appreciate it -- that you didn't find much to pick at is encouraging. Maybe I'm glimpsing the light at the end of the tunnel on this one at least.
I should think there's a glimmer out there somewhere, yes.

Though not setting up an underlying perspective grid was a mistake, and one I'm sure you won't make twice. I often sketch out the rough freehand, but when it's time to do the final it's also time to break out the tools.
I like the mood and setting of this picture... the picture and details are sharper too!

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I like a lot how the illumination looks, very impressive.

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still a WIP???????????? I can't believe it, it looks so finished all the time, and every time you post another WIP it gets better!!!!

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